LightRiku 2009-01-22 01:08:43

Well I definitely love the new character, Icealica (I believe that's how you spelled it in the flash). She's pretty cool looking. You have a lot of great ideas in this series. In retrospect, I feel kinda bad having only given it an 8/10, but at least I gave it a 5/5. I just didn't like the words you used in the intro. No offense but I found it rather cheesy. The rest was good though.

I just thought of a suggestion for you. If you could, perhaps make it so you don't have to move your mouse to get the button to advance the dialouge. The dialouge box changes location a lot, so moving your mouse every time it does gets annoying. Several similar flashes I know of have a button that advances the dialouge that is in one spot all the time, such as the lower right corner. That way, you move your mouse to one spot the whole time and just click to go on. It's a little less distracting from the story that way. I suppose you could even make the A key be what you need to press to go on, like the A button in a typical Mario game. Then you could keep the icon in the dialouge box, but make it button activated.

I like that you included Mimi, by the way!

Fechdog 2009-01-22 16:24:33

Like I said in the review, very nice flash. I just wanted to say that you have a great series from the start, and is Icealica a custom made sprite? I think she was a nice touch to start with this plot. Anyway, I wish I can help you withsome of the story with some input or something.

Croyt 2009-01-23 02:58:22

Good JOB! cant wait for part 2

Blade-worthy 2009-01-25 16:22:02

gay ass cock head cokka cokka head

kim909 2009-01-27 20:45:26

HI KAWAIIMINDA!!!
=D

kim909 2009-02-04 11:18:08

MARIO RHIMES WITH JELLY!!

darkwerewolf 2009-02-06 10:53:31

I like your super mario story I think that it will be a great mario sprite flash any idea when you will be finsh I am checking your profile every day for it fight on

Snipper64 2009-02-06 19:53:54

OMG! Jelly DOES rhimes with Mario!! Who knew? Thanks kim909 for that pearl of wisdom!

kim909 2009-02-10 21:02:56

O.O
*gasp*
SAAANNNTAA!!!!!!
YOU CAME!!
EVEN THOUGH I BURNED DOWN YOUR WORKSHOP AND KILLED YOUR REIGNDEER!!

kim909 2009-02-13 15:23:16

AH... eheh. nothing!
SO WHAT'D YA GET ME?!?!
HMM?!?!
IS IT THAT ATOM BOM I'VE BEEN DREAMING ABOUT MY WHOLE LIFE?!?!
OR IS IT THAT CHAINSAW THAT CAN SHOOT LAZERS?!?!
HUH?!?! HUH!!?!

kim909 2009-02-16 21:34:56

YES!! YES!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSS!!!!!!!!
-grabs chainsaw-
-destroys word-
O_O
...
i think i may have overdid it..
ehe

darkwerewolf 2009-02-19 10:33:29

delayed hu will is more time is needed to make it then take more time and do it right I whould raher what a bit loger and it be great then see it now and have it suck

fight on

kim909 2009-02-20 15:17:52

hehehehehehehe.. the picture changed =P
=D
XD

FamilyGuy05 2009-02-21 14:19:52

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kim909 2009-02-23 12:37:22

O.O
WELL I JUST CANT WAIT!!!
THIS CALLS FOR EXTREME PANTIENCE
-does nothing-

kim909 2009-03-01 20:38:53

I COULDNT HAVE THOUGHT OF A BETTER WAY TO SPEND MY LIFE!!
-seriously-
dragonflies =3

kim909 2009-03-05 20:51:52

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danicos 2009-03-06 20:14:27

...aww whocares soo sad...

LightRiku 2009-03-09 22:20:13

You have to start over? That must be frustrating. Glad to hear you aren't giving up on it, I was getting worried. Seems I worried for nothing then. Well, I'll be waiting patiently for it to come out then. I look forward to it. I know it will be great!

kim909 2009-03-10 18:13:21

iiiiiiiiii caaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannt teeeeeeeelll yoooooooooooooooo
=3